Write a letter to the government about the lack of sports facilities in your hometown for people of your age. In your letter, you should tell: • what facilities you want • why you want them • what suggestions you can give

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Dear sir I am summanpreet kaur from village bhakana kalan , Amritsar , Punjab. I am writing

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letter to bring some changes in our village related to

sports

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facilities as you know for mental and physical health games are playing a vital role but, in our ,area we don't have

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kinds of services.

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, on the outskirts of our ,village there is an open space which can be utilized in many ways. for ,instance it may convert into a playground for basketball , football and many other games, which is highly recommended for national and international

sports

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events, in ,addition a better

sports

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playground improves sportsmanship quality in youth.

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,our generation will take part in games.

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, with an increase in social media ,usage our generation is not involved in

sports

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but if a good space with an attractive playground will establish in our centre definitely youth will come out and make a mark in

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history. At

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, I want you to work on it and provide some financial aid to develop the area. I hope you'll look at my request and work on it. yours faithfully SumanPreet Kaur

kdilpreet631Sat Aug 19 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

196 words

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Write a letter to the government about the lack of sports facilities in your hometown for people of your age. In your letter, you should tell: • what facilities you want • why you want them • what suggestions you can give

The Greeting

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