the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee nd tea buying and drinking habits

the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee nd tea buying and drinking habits
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The bar graph displays the data collected in a survey about the
coffee
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and tea buying and drinking habits of
residents
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in five
cities
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in Australia in the
last
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four weeks.
Overall
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, in all the
cities
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except
Adelaide
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, more people went to a cafe for
coffee
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or tea than bought instant or fresh
coffee
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. In
Adelaide
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, going to a cafe and buying instant
coffee
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were almost equally common. Most
residents
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in Melbourne, Hobart, Sydney, and Brisbane visited a cafe for
coffee
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or tea, at approximately 64%, 63%, 62%, and 55% respectively,
whereas
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just under half of
residents
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in
Adelaide
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did so. These five
cities
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also
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had roughly half of
residents
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purchasing instant
coffee
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, and the figures in Hobart and Brisbane were almost 55%. In comparison, the proportion of people who bought fresh
coffee
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was never as high as 45% in any of the five
cities
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, with those in Brisbane and
Adelaide
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, both at nearly 35%, less likely than those in the other three
cities
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to do so.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, residents, cities, adelaide with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • percentage
  • frequency
  • preference
  • health benefits
  • caffeine content
  • cultural significance
  • consumption
  • trends
  • venues
  • social aspects
  • beverage
  • shift
  • influence
  • comparison
  • analysis
  • discussion
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