With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threanted to the point of extenction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with the problem.

It is undeniable that with

the

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environmental manipulation

such

as unlawful poaching, cutting trees and other activities for the aim of humans' comforts most

animals

and

plants

would stay on the verge of extinction. From my

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of view, it is

crucial

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fact that

this

problem should be taken seriously. In

this

essay I intend to delve into the problem and suggest some

solution

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.

To begin

with,

Animals

and

plants

involve important parts of human life which means that they

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guarantee mankind being.

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life

are

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a chain and

they

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existence can balance the ecosystem.

For instance

,

extinction

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of

kind

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of mouth can distribute to the over-populated

some

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species

while

it would lead to the vanishing

species

of

animals

which

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from

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them because lack of food

source

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.

In addition

, nowadays most

use

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of

animals

and

plants

are in the medical field. most cures

prescribing

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by doctors are containing

material

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that have been taken from

animals

or specific

plants

gens that they can affect directly

on

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humans The solutions are not easy but joint efforts by

government

and

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can lessen the gravity of the situation. At

individual

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level

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people should obey the rules which have been legislated by

government

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in order to conserve these

species

from

endanger

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such

as restriction of hunting in specific areas.

furthermore

,

Government

should plan for organizing some endangered

species

and allocate them

budget

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in order to handle them with care and provide them

proper

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quality of life

such

as

keeping

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them in

national

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park

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or assigning some restricted areas where no poachers cannot go there.

To sum up

, I reiterate that

animals

and

plants

are crucial for

humans'

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being and their extinction can

leads

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to irrecoverable

damages

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on

earth

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. The alleviation will reach from shared responsibility of folks and

government

.