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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is believed that in both professional and personal lives,
people
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 are encouraged to take risks. In my view, the disadvantages of
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 statement in
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 outweigh the advantages.
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 with, there is a proverb from investors who are close to gambling situations that need them to take a
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 in every action, which is “High
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 - High Return”.
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, taking another probability can help
people
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 to get a new
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 with better quality of
life
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.
For example
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, a businessman from
Indonesia
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, Chairul Tanjung. He chose to move from their hometown, a suburban area in
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, to the capital city of
Indonesia
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. He took a chance on his personal and professional
life
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. At first time, he experienced a lot of difficulties but with big efforts, today he became a billionaire in
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 who owned Trans Corp, a big company from
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.
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, taking a new probability is the same as betting
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life
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 on an uncertain result that might be a bad consequence.
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, some
people
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 thought that it is not important to put a
risk
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 in their
life
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. As long as they have been living a good
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, they do not need to take a chance that can affect their
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 in the future.
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, when
people
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 are working in a big company, and try to they probably never think about quitting the job and trying to build their own business, because it is too risky to establish a business and resign from their position,
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 they already have a good position in their employment
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 if they take a
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, they might face a difficulty in obtaining a good
life
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, the way before they take the gambling. In summary, taking a chance or
risk
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 might give
people
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 a better
life
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.
However
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, the consequences of
risk
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 are gambling and uncertainty, which is too risky.
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, the disadvantages of taking a
risk
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 clearly overshadow the drawbacks.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Opportunities
  • Growth
  • Innovation
  • Challenges
  • Self-discovery
  • Resilience
  • Uncertainty
  • Consequences
  • Calculated risks
  • Stagnation
  • Regret
  • Comfort zone
  • Entrepreneurship
  • Adventurous spirit
  • Thriving
  • Failure
  • Mitigate
  • Reap the rewards
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