The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit,during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit,during the same two periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
first
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table compares the number of people who visited
Ashdown
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the Ashdown
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Museum in the year before and later
restoration
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.
However
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, the given pie chart depicts the rate of visitor
satisfaction
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in these years.
Overall
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, it can clearly be seen that after refurbishment, the number of visitors and their
satisfaction
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increased dramatically. In the
first
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year ( before
restoration
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), 74000 people visited the museum,
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after
restoration
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this
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number increased by 18000 to 92000.
In addition
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, as the pie chart shows in the
first
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year the proportion of visitors who were dissatisfied and very dissatisfied were 40% and 10%, respectively ( about 50% in sum) and by
restoration
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,
this
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rate decreased by 20% in sum.
Conversely
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, after refurbishment, the figure for
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took
first
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place in these statistics (40%) which saw a 10% growth and that of very
satisfaction
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rose from 10% to 35%.
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, we can see the proportions of visitors without responses in
this
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survey remained constant.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words first, restoration, satisfaction with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • refurbishment
  • visitor numbers
  • satisfaction levels
  • very satisfied
  • satisfied
  • neither satisfied nor dissatisfied
  • dissatisfied
  • very dissatisfied
  • survey results
  • comparison
  • impact
  • effectiveness
  • visitor experience
  • overall improvement
  • increase/decrease in visitors
  • positive feedback
  • negative feedback
  • visitor survey
  • survey period
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