The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit,during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
first
table compares the number of people who visited Ashdown
Museum in the year before and later Correct article usage
the Ashdown
restoration
. However
, the given pie chart depicts the rate of visitor satisfaction
in these years.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that after refurbishment, the number of visitors and their satisfaction
increased dramatically.
In the first
year ( before restoration
), 74000 people visited the museum, while
after restoration
this
number increased by 18000 to 92000. In addition
, as the pie chart shows in the first
year the proportion of visitors who were dissatisfied and very dissatisfied were 40% and 10%, respectively ( about 50% in sum) and by restoration
, this
rate decreased by 20% in sum. Conversely
, after refurbishment, the figure for satisfaction
took first
place in these statistics (40%) which saw a 10% growth and that of very satisfaction
rose from 10% to 35%. Also
, we can see the proportions of visitors without responses in this
survey remained constant.Submitted by mhshid on
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