The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit,during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
first
table compares the number of people who visited Use synonyms
Ashdown
Museum in the year before and later Correct article usage
the Ashdown
restoration
. Use synonyms
However
, the given pie chart depicts the rate of visitor Linking Words
satisfaction
in these years.
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Overall
, it can clearly be seen that after refurbishment, the number of visitors and their Linking Words
satisfaction
increased dramatically.
In the Use synonyms
first
year ( before Use synonyms
restoration
), 74000 people visited the museum, Use synonyms
while
after Linking Words
restoration
Use synonyms
this
number increased by 18000 to 92000. Linking Words
In addition
, as the pie chart shows in the Linking Words
first
year the proportion of visitors who were dissatisfied and very dissatisfied were 40% and 10%, respectively ( about 50% in sum) and by Use synonyms
restoration
, Use synonyms
this
rate decreased by 20% in sum. Linking Words
Conversely
, after refurbishment, the figure for Linking Words
satisfaction
took Use synonyms
first
place in these statistics (40%) which saw a 10% growth and that of very Use synonyms
satisfaction
rose from 10% to 35%. Use synonyms
Also
, we can see the proportions of visitors without responses in Linking Words
this
survey remained constant.Linking Words
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