In the past, most people lived in small villages , where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

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lived in small

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where they recognized everyone and they

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to everyone.These days,

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plenty of

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living in big cities where

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few

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familiar

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they

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. First of all, there are

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plenty of

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of

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living in

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a small village

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villages

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,because of agriculture,

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will be

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.So,they do a

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of effort

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evolve their products of agriculture.

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,there are plenty of plants

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there.These plants produce many oxygen.So,there

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not any pollution of air.

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,the inhabitants of a small community

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accommodating, generous,welcoming and loving with each other.When you need something or you have any problem, they help you right away.

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, the residence of these places is wide

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the village is small. You will travel and live with freedom.

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,there are

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sides of living there.

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, there are the industry systems

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.So, in

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place, the development is lower.

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, the workplace is not enough for

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.

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,there are a

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of

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without

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.

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,living in a small community has a

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of diverse sides.But of course, I think small

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are comfortable for everyone.

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useful

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not only for us , but

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our members of

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the family

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.Because

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the

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living

in

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there will be a few ill than

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in the large city.In my opinion,living in

a small

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a small village

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villages

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is better than the other cities.