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Some people think that children should only read academic books. Others believe that reading books for pleasure is equally important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some parents believe that children should only study textbooks being taught in classrooms because they will help them achieve higher grades in their exams. As they focus on academic
books
 more, they will be able to perform well and gain a better understanding of how to tackle subjects that seem difficult to them. Despite, the fact that reading educational
books
 is very important, in my opinion,
books
 which are read for fun have equal importance since children gain from its social and educational aspects. By reading
books
 for enjoyment, different characteristics become part of their personality which enables them to have a better understanding of themselves and others. Nonfiction
books
 namely biographies of people give an insight into their lives and hardship that teaches one to become empathetic in someone else’s difficult times.
Similarly
, when people read English literature and poetry, they develop an appreciation for the poet’s talent and art making them passionate to understand the vocabulary and language used. These social skills will play a factor in the success of their interpersonal relationships and should not be ignored.
In addition
, they have educational purposes as well. When people read articles on general topics
such
 as travelling, sports and movies.
This
 improves their general knowledge. They in turn learn a range of vocabulary selective to the topic, benefiting from them when they come across these topics in various public gathering discussions. I believe,
therefore
, that both the social and academic aspect of reading fiction and nonfiction
books
 comes in handy in children’s intellectual development. In conclusion, I believe, that reading
books
 for fun is as important as reading academic
books
. By reading fiction novels they will not only learn empathy from reading characters in those novels but it will
also
 increase their general knowledge.
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