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many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. do you agree or disagree

#people #home #rent
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Some people believe that everybody who buys their
home
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 is more relaxed than renting it. In my opinion, I agree with
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 point and will give the reason why in the following essay. On the one hand, buying has almost always been favoured over renting when it comes to housing because of the housing facilities when you own a
home
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 as a lifestyle, age, work situation, desired location, and readiness to settle down for the long haul. When you get a
house
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, you can not only decorate your room but
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 ornament the whole
house
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 in your style, you can do whatever you'd like to the
house
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 you own, from full remodels to painting the walls. You'll have a lot more flexibility in all of these things, and for many, that's a seriously appealing part of buying your
home
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.
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, the family which has a
house
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 will be more stable and familiar. If you have a
house
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, you can do everything you like and it is very comfortable for you to invite your friends when you have a party or an event. For some people, it is worth it to have the emotional connection to a
home
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 you own, and a sense of stability that renting won't bring. When you have a
home
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, you will have better security than if you rent and can't ensure when you meet a thief or have a problem.
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, I feel that owning a
home
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 can be a pleasurable experience if done within a budget.
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, it could turn into a negative situation when a person buys a
home
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 by getting a loan
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 way beyond his repaying capacity.
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