Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

There is no doubt that

people

have a lot of treatment options

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these days

. There are sets of

people

who prefer to use alternative pills and methods

instead

of seeing their GP. In my view, it has many drawbacks and can cause numerous problems

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body. In

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essay, I will scrutinize

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notion and I will indicate my opinion with relevant examples. To commence with, not only are unprescribed or

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alternative

medicines immensely dangerous, but

also

they can create a resistance system to other important medicines.

For instance

,

according to

a recent newspaper article, four out of ten essential antibiotics are not useful for some diseases

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they are not effective anymore.

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, if

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prefer to use some pills without recommendation by doctors, other treatment ways could be useless.

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could be side effects on

people

’s

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. After consuming

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of products, internal organs namely kidneys, liver, heart or muscles will show some unexpected reactions

such

as allergies, failures or disorders.

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, these symptoms could be fatal

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for

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people

or children.

As a consequence

,

people

can be more sick

instead

of healing. To increase these bad effects, the government should take some actions. In conclusion,

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of

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of products could be extremely dangerous and can bring many problems

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. In order to reduce their

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,

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governments

government

can inform their communities and they can new

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of these things.