The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cuties. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cuties.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.
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The preceding bar chart depicts the
percentage
of the drinking pattern of
coffee
and tea in Five Australian cities throughout a period of four weeks.
Overall
, the proportion of
people
who went to a cafe to have a drink is the highest, Followed by buying instant
coffee
habit, and folks who bought fresh
coffee
had the least
percentage
. In terms of
people
who went to a cafe, Hobart and Melbourne showed the highest
percentage
, with approximately (62%) of citizens.
then
Sydney came in second place, with nearly (60%) followed by Brisban with slightly more than half of the
people
, and Adelaide came in
last
place, with less than (40%). As concerning
people
who bought fresh
coffee
, Sydney and Melbourne were the highest, with nearly (41%) as compared to Hobart showed slightly less than (40%), Brisban and Adelaide showed the same
percentage
of nearly (35%).
on the other hand
, Hobart and Brisban were the highest in buying instant
coffee
, with slightly more than half of the
people
. followed by Exactly (50%) of folks in Adelaide, Melbourne and Sydney were the lowest with nearly (48%) and (42%) respectively.
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