Nowadays a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think this can have negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Currently, there is a discussion regarding banning advertisements that are aimed at
children
due to
arguments raised by some people about the negative
effects
caused by it. Despite the strong positive
effects
on the commercial or economic side, I agree that the large amount of advertising
that is
aimed at
children
should be banned because of the negative
effects
. It is well known that
ads
are one of the most effective go-to-market strategies for a company to sell its products and advertising to
children
directly is another great way to increase sales.
While
some companies could reach their target audiences directly, others have a challenge of difference between the user and the customer, where in
this
case the
children
do not have buying power. By showing the products directly to the
children
directly, many companies could trigger a chain of reactions where
children
would ask their parent or guardian to buy them the product.
Furthermore
, an independent study in Europe
also
proved
this
marketing technique is effective in increasing product penetration by up to 85%
in addition
to reducing operational costs by 50%.
However
, high exposure to the
ads
would affect the development of
children
badly. In the state where their brain cannot differentiate good from bad,
this
activity could impact the future of
children
's psychology by increasing the hunger for products that they don't really need.
Additionally
,
this
would
also
start the buying behaviour that would lead to a bad consumerism lifestyle in the long run if the parent could not control it as soon as possible. From the same independent study, the data showed that the combination of direct
ads
to the
children
and spoiling by parents, not only proved the stated arguments above, but
also
listed other negative
effects
such
as exposure to sexual or adult contents, high level of envies to others, broken homes, and etc. In conclusion,
while
ads
for
children
is a great strategy for companies to pump their sales number,
this
causes more harm for
children
and their families .
Therefore
, a new regulation for banning
this
sales technique is needed to save future generations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Targeted advertising
  • Psychological development
  • Artificial needs
  • Unhealthy eating habits
  • Materialism
  • Consumerism
  • Parental responsibility
  • Critical thinking
  • Informative content
  • Economic implications
  • Revenue generation
  • Content creation
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