Nowadays a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think this can have negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Currently, there is a discussion regarding banning advertisements that are aimed at
children
due to
arguments raised by some people about the negative effects
caused by it. Despite the strong positive effects
on the commercial or economic side, I agree that the large amount of advertising that is
aimed at children
should be banned because of the negative effects
.
It is well known that ads
are one of the most effective go-to-market strategies for a company to sell its products and advertising to children
directly is another great way to increase sales. While
some companies could reach their target audiences directly, others have a challenge of difference between the user and the customer, where in this
case the children
do not have buying power. By showing the products directly to the children
directly, many companies could trigger a chain of reactions where children
would ask their parent or guardian to buy them the product. Furthermore
, an independent study in Europe also
proved this
marketing technique is effective in increasing product penetration by up to 85% in addition
to reducing operational costs by 50%.
However
, high exposure to the ads
would affect the development of children
badly. In the state where their brain cannot differentiate good from bad, this
activity could impact the future of children
's psychology by increasing the hunger for products that they don't really need. Additionally
, this
would also
start the buying behaviour that would lead to a bad consumerism lifestyle in the long run if the parent could not control it as soon as possible. From the same independent study, the data showed that the combination of direct ads
to the children
and spoiling by parents, not only proved the stated arguments above, but also
listed other negative effects
such
as exposure to sexual or adult contents, high level of envies to others, broken homes, and etc.
In conclusion, while
ads
for children
is a great strategy for companies to pump their sales number, this
causes more harm for children
and their families . Therefore
, a new regulation for banning this
sales technique is needed to save future generations.Submitted by gurunnevada on
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