The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The map displays a public
park
called Grange
Park
when it
initially
opened in 1920, and how it looks now.
Overall
, the
park
layout has been updated to include modern facilities, which have replaced some natural features. The updates have improved the
park
's accessibility and functionality. The two entrances on Arnold Avenue and
Eldon
Street
have remained unchanged.
However
, the
park
now has an underground car
park
, and a right-side entrance from
Eldon
Street
was constructed for car
park
users. Once inside the
park
from
Eldon
Street
, the central
feature
used to be a fountain, which has now been replaced by a rose garden surrounded by seats. To the right of the
Eldon
Street
entrance, a water
feature
has been added, taking the place of the previous glasshouse and seating area. A café and children's play area now occupy the space where the rose garden and water plants' pound used to be, opposite the water
feature
. The
park
's left side, which previously housed a stage for musicians, now features an amphitheatre. The only unchanged
feature
in
this
area is the rose garden on the Arnold Avenue side.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recreational facilities
  • landscaping
  • naturalistic
  • amenities
  • formal gardens
  • ergonomic
  • symmetric designs
  • inclusive
  • accessible
  • accommodations
  • native plant species
  • societal changes
  • visitor services
  • community events
  • evolution
  • modern playgrounds
  • wildflower meadows
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