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Describe a city you would like to recommend as a nice place to live (not to my hometown) You should say: What it is? Where it is? What do you know about this place? And explain why you recommend it as a nice place to live.

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Speaking of a city in Vietnam that I love and would like to recommend as a nice destination to live, it would definitely be Mang Den Town. Truth be told, I had travelled here three times. It has an irresistible attraction to me and that's the reason I came back to
this
 town. Mang Den is a remote town far away from the centre of Tay Nguyen province.
Although
 it is small, it has nothing to complain about. Indeed, as for the people there, they are hospitable
as well as
 kind to everyone around them. Whenever anyone needs help, all the neighbours are willing to lend him a hand, especially on some special occasions like funerals or weddings. With regard to facilities and sceneries, despite the lack of facilities which really put people in difficult situations sometimes, the scenery around the village is something that
this
 place is proud of. Truly speaking, it is surrounded by ranges of green mountains and there is a huge waterfall crashing down into a river adjacent to the village, which creates a breathtaking view for any visitor. When it comes to specialities, my village is famous for its “Buffalo Noodle”, a traditional food made from buffalo meat and rice, and
such
 a great combination of ingredients really generates an awesome taste. And yeah, when it comes to reason I would like to introduce
this
 place because I felt absolutely great. When I came here, I can get out of the kind of pressure I got in at work, and into the countryside, and just do some simple exercise, walking, and swimming. I hope that when I become elderly, I will come here and settle down in
this
 city.
This
 is simply because
this
 place has been the best selection of my mind until now and it will always be.
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