Smoking not only harms the smoker but also those who are nearby, there fore smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Society, usually, does not think about it, but
smoke
it is really unhealthy, not only for the
smoker
themself but
also
for the
people
near them. Because of it, I strongly agree with the statement that proposes to make smoking illegal in public areas. The main reason why I support
this
is that, as I already explained in the introduction, smoking is really harmful to all
people
, even if you do not
smoke
you can easily exile smoking particles when
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you are in an environment with smokers.
For example
, in a public space,
such
as a restaurant, it could be really dangerous to
smoke
, because there could be pregnant women or
people
with certain health conditions, that may have severe consequences. It can
also
be disgusting, for
people
in general, to inhale those substances
while
eating.
Furthermore
, making it impossible to
smoke
whenever and wherever
people
want, could reduce significantly the percentage of smokers. Take,
for instance
, the same example of the restaurant. The
smoker
provided that they couldn't
smoke
inside the restaurant, will necessary go outside for a few minutes and
then
return inside.
Although
this
may seem convenient, it is not for the
smoker
, who will have to find new places where to
smoke
, and that would lower the impulse of always wanting to
smoke
. In conclusion, smoking in public places should be banned. For one thing, it will be beneficial for the
people
's health around the
smoker
, for another, the
smoker
themself will benefit, because they will have fewer areas where to
smoke
.
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