Smoking not only harms the smoker but also those who are nearby, there fore smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Society, usually, does not think about it, but
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it is really unhealthy, not only for the
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themself but
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for the
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near them. Because of it, I strongly agree with the statement that proposes to make smoking illegal in public areas. The main reason why I support
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is that, as I already explained in the introduction, smoking is really harmful to all
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, even if you do not
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you can easily exile smoking particles when
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you are in an environment with smokers.
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, in a public space,
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as a restaurant, it could be really dangerous to
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, because there could be pregnant women or
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with certain health conditions, that may have severe consequences. It can
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be disgusting, for
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in general, to inhale those substances
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eating.
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, making it impossible to
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whenever and wherever
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want, could reduce significantly the percentage of smokers. Take,
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, the same example of the restaurant. The
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provided that they couldn't
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inside the restaurant, will necessary go outside for a few minutes and
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return inside.
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this
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may seem convenient, it is not for the
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, who will have to find new places where to
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, and that would lower the impulse of always wanting to
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. In conclusion, smoking in public places should be banned. For one thing, it will be beneficial for the
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's health around the
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, for another, the
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themself will benefit, because they will have fewer areas where to
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