1.Your next-door neighbor owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbor requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: oYour reason for writing oWhat you would like to happen oA nice, respectful style.

Dear Robert , Hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter to request you to do something about your
dog
which barks the whole day and night. I want to request you about the barking of your
dog
every day. I have a child who is perusing his SSC and it is very important for him to get good marks in SSC, but he is not able to concentrate
due to
the ongoing barking of your
dog
.
Moreover
, in the nighttime
also
we are not able to sleep
due to
the barking and the next morning we feel too sleepy during our job hours. I would like to appeal to you to get your
dog
to the veterinarian if needed or else in my opinion, please regularize his food cycle. I hope you will take it as a positive interaction. I Wish you and your
dog
long and prosperous life. Yours faithfully,
Submitted by patels on

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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