The pie charts illustrates the number of sales in different spheres of online shopping in New Zealand during 10 years.
The bar charts illustrate the proportion of
the
online marketing product in New Zealand in 10 years after 2003. Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, it can be seen that although
travel was
the highest percentage in 2003, this
was
droped
to second rank in 2013.
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dropped
To begin
with 2003, the majority of products that show on Add an article
the internet
internet
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Internet
was
travel trip, with 36%. Followed by, 24% of clothes and the was
the second highest in this
year. The combination between film and music and books were
40%, 21% Correct subject-verb agreement
was
was
the former and 19% was
the latter.
Turning to the next pie chart. 2013 experienced a dramatical
increase in the Replace the word
dramatic
flim
and music to 33%, and Correct your spelling
film
this
was
the first highest rank. Followed by, the trip was
dropped drastically to 29%, Unnecessary verb
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this
was
the second highest in this
period. The
remaining categories, including clothes and books, the book Change preposition
In the
was
a slight growth to 22%, while
the clothes suffered a drastic decline to 16%.Submitted by jirawat.sea on
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