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The table below gives information about rail transport in four contries in 2007.

The table below gives information about rail transport in four contries in 2007.
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The table shows data about railroad transportation in Malaysia,
Canada
,
China
 and the
UAE
 in 2007.
Overall
,
China
 had the largest
number
 of
people
 who use
rail
transport
, accompanied by the longest
kilometres
 per head of population taking,
while
 the smallest figures for
people
 taking
rail
transport
 and the shortest distance per person taking can be seen in
Canada
.
However
,
Canada
 had the largest cargo-carried ability. In terms of the
number
 of
people
 using
rail
transport
, the figure for
China
 was 27
million
, which was significantly higher than the other three countries, almost five times as large as the figure for the second-largest country-Malaysia (5.9
million
).
This
 was followed by the
UAE
, with the
number
 of
people
 at 5.5
million
.
Canada
 had the smallest
number
 of
people
 who takes
rail
transport
, with only 0.3
million
people
. Regarding passenger
kilometres
 per person taking,
China
 presented the longest distance, which was 1980
kilometres
. The
UAE
 and Malaysia had similar data, and the figures for them were 780 and 770
kilometres
 respectively,
whereas
Canada
 only had 80
kilometres
 per person, which was considerably shorter than the other three nations. Interestingly,
Canada
 had the largest cargo-carried capacity (28.20
tons
), followed by
China
 (23.01
tons
) and Malaysia (22.2
tons
), slightly higher than the
UAE
 (21.9
tons
).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, china, uae, number, people, rail, transport, kilometres, million, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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