You work in a busy but poorly organized office and you are keen to be promoted. Your employer needs to find a new supervisor for your department. Write a letter to your employer. In the letter • Ask to be considered for this job • Explain why you would be a suitable candidate • Outline the current problems and the changes you would like to make

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my interest in getting a promotion in your company. I have been working in your laundromat for a decade as a supervisor. I have gotten to know that

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are looking for a candidate who is eligible to work as a senior supervisor in a busy environment. I am requesting you to appoint me for

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role. As I possess certain skills,

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as leadership,

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abilities, and problem-solving, I would handle

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position very well.

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, there are some issues in our laundromat.

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, only six chairs are available for customers to sit

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washing their customers.

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, our vending machine has been showing some errors since

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week. I would like to suggest some solutions to mitigate

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issues. I think that having more chairs and hiring a mechanic to repair the machine can solve the problems. I am looking forward to your positive consideration. Yours sincerely, Rupinder Kaur.

rupindersamrow222

Oct 3, 2025

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Be a bit more clear on your fit. Add one line of proof of past work that shows you can lead.

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Make a short plan. State a few steps you will take to run the shop well.

coherence

Keep each paragraph to one idea. Use simple links between ideas.

coherence

Use easier words. Use 'First', 'Next', 'Then' to link your ideas.

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Clear request to be considered for the job.

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Shows some skill and a plan to fix issues.

coherence

Overall structure is clear and polite.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

160 words

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keen to be promoted
suitable candidate
supervisor role
relevant experience
organizational abilities
problem-solving skills
familiarity with current problems
impact on productivity
streamlining processes
improving communication channels
introducing new tools and technologies

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