The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps show how the
road
access to the
city
hospital has changed from the year 2007 to 2010.
Overall
there are many improvisations held in the facilities over 3 years. The
bus
stop was converted into a
bus
station,
car
parks for staff and the public were separated, and roundabouts were established.
To begin
with,there was a ring
road
around the
city
hospital which was connected by the hospital
road
to the
city
road
in 2007.
In addition
, two roundabouts were installed at the junctions of the hospital
road
that is
between the ring
road
and the
city
road
in 2010. On the two sides of the hospital ,
road
there were 6
bus
stops that existed back in 2007. But, in 2010 it was replaced as a single
bus
station on the west side of the hospital
road
. In 2007, there was a
car
park for both
city
hospital staff and the public on the southeast side of Ring
Road
. That
car
park remained only for staff and a new public
car
park was built on the east side of the
road
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city, bus, car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • improvements
  • facilitate
  • congestion
  • junctions
  • streamline
  • traffic flow
  • reduce congestion
  • public transport
  • bus station
  • efficiency
  • accessibility
  • parking facilities
  • car park
  • designated
  • alleviate
  • issues
  • adequate space
  • enhancements
  • overall accessibility
  • traffic management
  • convenience
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