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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps show how the
road
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 access to the
city
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 hospital has changed from the year 2007 to 2010.
Overall
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 there are many improvisations held in the facilities over 3 years. The
bus
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 stop was converted into a
bus
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 station,
car
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 parks for staff and the public were separated, and roundabouts were established.
To begin
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 with,there was a ring
road
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 around the
city
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 hospital which was connected by the hospital
road
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 to the
city
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road
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 in 2007.
In addition
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 , two roundabouts were installed at the junctions of the hospital
road
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that is
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 between the ring
road
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 and the
city
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road
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 in 2010. On the two sides of the hospital ,
road
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 there were 6
bus
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 stops that existed back in 2007. But, in 2010 it was replaced as a single
bus
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 station on the west side of the hospital
road
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. In 2007, there was a
car
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 park for both
city
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 hospital staff and the public on the southeast side of Ring
Road
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. That
car
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 park remained only for staff and a new public
car
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 park was built on the east side of the
road
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city, bus, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • improvements
  • facilitate
  • congestion
  • junctions
  • streamline
  • traffic flow
  • reduce congestion
  • public transport
  • bus station
  • efficiency
  • accessibility
  • parking facilities
  • car park
  • designated
  • alleviate
  • issues
  • adequate space
  • enhancements
  • overall accessibility
  • traffic management
  • convenience
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