it is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and in their personal lives. do you think the disadvantages of taking risks outweigh the advantages?

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It is evident that sometimes
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have to
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situations
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when they cross their comfort
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of living and set some examples of bravery in their office. Some commentators are of the view that any
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of
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whose consequences are unknown is a detrimental example,
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, others think
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type of practice is appreciatable.
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, I personally believe that the disadvantages of taking
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and thinking out of the box do not outweigh the advantages. Generally speaking, some
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always try to maintain a regular, risk-free
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as well as
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do not want to break the patterns of daily
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. Not only do they try to avoid any
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of experimentation in their private
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of living but
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they feel nervous when they have to
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any
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of situation where they do not know the outcomes and that's why they always think any
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of risk will only bring problems in their
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. A
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reason for
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type of biasedness is that from their childhood they live in a controlled situation. Most urban middle-class
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fear any
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of trend whose outcome is unknown to them.
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they avoid trying anything in their individual and social
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of living.
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in their working
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they do not try to do anything risky to avoid the unwanted result.
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, they feel that if they take any risk or try something that nobody did before their employer will not appreciate it. I am of the view that most of the important inventions or victories in history are the result of the courageous act of some
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. Most of
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scientists, politicians or successful person they are open to experimenting with their
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and trying new options which are not even tried by anyone else in the previous time.
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,
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who fight against hunger or poverty in their daily
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or doctors who work in
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remote area always have to
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new types of
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where they should practice some
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of bravery to solve newly emerged problems. In our daily
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life
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unwanted problems or financial
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are very common. Sometimes we have to
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diseases when we do not have enough money.
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, without taking any kinds of
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we cannot
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these types of
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.
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, I want to mention that obviously overconfidence is not a well
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of practice and we should take calculated
risks
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in our working lives and individual
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to avoid unwanted outcomes. But I do not think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages of taking necessary
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in our
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of living and working conditions.
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  • Challenges
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  • Stagnation
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