The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates changes in average
temperatures
in a month in three different cities:
Paris
,
Dubai
and
Sydney
. The
temperature
is displayed in Celsius
degrees
.
According to
the graphic presentation, the weather report in
Sydney
is not the same as in
Dubai
and
Paris
.
Moreover
,
Paris
is the coldest city compared to
Dubai
and
Sydney
. To start with, the
temperature
range in
Paris
never rises beyond 20
degrees
.
Whereas
the
temperature
range in
Dubai
hardly reduced from its average level, except during January (19
degrees
C).
Nevertheless
, the
temperatures
in
Paris
and
Dubai
still have some commonalities, as their
temperatures
rise gradually at the beginning of the year and reach the maximum of 20 and 36 respectively in August. Later, both
temperatures
will reduce sharply. When it comes to
Sydney
, the place experiences a 24-degree
temperature
in January.
Then
immediately after that, the
temperature
drops to the lowest point of 14
degrees
in July.
Similarly
,
at the end
of the year, the
temperature
shoots up to 23
degrees
.
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