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some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research

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Nowadays, an increasing number of
people
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 are getting enthusiastic about searching out their living places histories in some countries. I think the reason behind
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 excavation is related to the nature of
people
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's curiosity about the unknown. My suggestion for conducting
such
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 research would be to collect
information
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 from the
neighborhood
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neighbourhood
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. Since the beginning of civilization,
people
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 have always been interested in finding out the unknown,
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 as stories about their ancestors. The curious minds of
people
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 make them want to find out the lineage of the owners of their
house
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. In some countries, it has become a tradition.
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, in developed countries,
people
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 always want to know about the history of the land or
house
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 they want to buy. If someone cannot find or is not convinced by the
information
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 about the
house
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, they might not be interested in buying the building. To conduct the research, one should first go to the
neighborhood
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 because the possibility of knowing the former owner is high. They can provide accurate
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 about the previous owner or the history of the
house
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.
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local communities or local gathering places could be
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apply
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potential
place
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places
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 to look because local
people
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 often gather in these types of places.
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, a café is the best area to collect
information
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.
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, senior citizens of that particular area could be considered a valuable resource of
information
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 because they have been living there for a very long time.    In conclusion,
people
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 become more interested in finding out about their livelihood out of curiosity, and it is very necessary to relax their
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minds
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.
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