The pie charts illustrates the number of sales in different spheres of online shopping in New Zealand during 10 years.
The pie charts compare the
sales
in various entities of online shopping such
as Travel
, Film and Music, Books
and Clothes
during a time
period of 10 years(2003-2013).
In general, the majority of sales
during the time
period were made in Travel
. We observed an increase in sales
of Books
and Films with time
. However
, with time
, the number
has decreased in the case of Travel
and Clothes
.
To begin
with, the majority of sales
in online platforms in 2003 was in Travel
with around 36%. This
number
gradually decreased over the 10-year time
and reached 29% by 2013. Another decline in online shopping was Clothes
. Back in 2003, the number
of sales
made online for clothes
covered about 24%. Whereas
this
number
reduced in 2013 and reached the lowest total at 16%.
On the other hand
, both Film and Music and Books
made a gradual increase in total sales
since 2003. Film and Music only made about 21% of sales
in 2003. Conversely
, this
number
peaked in 2013 and reached the highest among all other entities at around 33%. Similarly
, for Books
, the number
of sales
has
increased from 19% to 22% in 2013.Unnecessary verb
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