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The table below gives information about rail transport in four contries in 2007.

The table below gives information about rail transport in four contries in 2007.
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rail transport in 2007 in Malaysia, Canada, China and UAE. In general, it is clear from the table that the
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 of people using rail transport in China was the largest
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 about 27 million .
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 of people in Canada is the lowest
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 about 0.3 million.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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