When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I agree up to a point, but the exterior appearance is essential as well.

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the look of

this

site is beautiful, it will make a good impression

with

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every individual and they will

have

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interested in

this

building.

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, it is not certain that the

the

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purpose of using is more important than the appearance outside.

Firstly

, if people use some buildings with the right functions, it will bring many advantages things for them like their buildings will more develop and gain some achievements in their domains.

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, if the schools are used with the appropriate target, it will pay

student’s

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attention because they have spacious space and it can help the students too much in studying and inspire them to go to school and school

also

assist their students

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unleashing their

creativities

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. That’s why everybody must focus on your intended use

but

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whether it

is attracted

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some

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famous companies or

the

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workers.

Thus

, it

also

depends on their appearance

too

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. Because the first impression is the most important, if the structure is good and it looks

like

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spacious and eye-catching

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individuals, it will bring the best efficiently for the

investers

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investors

. If the architect is not properly with

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the aesthetic perception of people, it will have some bad comments and lead to many

drawback

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things

such

as your work can be prevented by a few bad factors and it

also

affects

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their reputations

on

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this

fields

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.

Finally

, I think both factors

is

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necessary because if the building can have both conditions, it will meet the requirement of

market

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and perhaps it can make a big profit for your building.