Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant adult. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are causes and what solutions can be taken?
Nowadays, modern children live in modest
lifestyle
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phenomenon is followed by a lavish and unhealthy diet. Linking Words
Due to
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this
habit, contemporary kids have several diseases that were once contagious to adults only. One of those illnesses is obesity, which is the most prevalent in young people currently. Linking Words
This
essay will discuss the causes and solutions that can be proposed to tackle Linking Words
this
condition.
The main reason for Linking Words
this
phenomenon is food. Many people, and Linking Words
also
kids, eat fast food with high Linking Words
sugar
content and less plant-based delicacies, Use synonyms
such
as vegetables and fruits. The current world community has a big favour for sweet foods. Because of that, many companies, especially fast-movement consumer goods, in the world compete to make better products with sugary flavours. But the Linking Words
sugar
composition is very high compared with the serving size, even in several products Use synonyms
sugar
composes 20-50% of its ingredients. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, marketing efforts make us don't aware of our Linking Words
sugar
intake per day when consuming those products. The high amounts of Use synonyms
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in the blood will cause several sicknesses, Use synonyms
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hypertency
, obesity, and diabetes, until cardiac attack to death.
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Therefore
, there must be concrete solutions to solve Linking Words
this
health issue. I recommend two proposals, Linking Words
such
as doing a Linking Words
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tax
and promoting a healthy Use synonyms
lifestyle
. The Use synonyms
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tax
will be imposed on high-Use synonyms
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proportion foods. Use synonyms
Sugar
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tax
is a must because we have to make consumers aware of what they ingest and compensate for the amount of money that the government paid to heal Use synonyms
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-related illnesses. Use synonyms
Besides
that, everyone has to make up their mind that we should have a better Linking Words
lifestyle
by doing several activities, Use synonyms
such
as digesting healthy food, exercising regularly sports routinely, having enough sleep daily, etc.
In conclusion, there is a serious problem at the moment where our children have some Linking Words
sugar
-related diseases that must be concerned seriously. The main reason for Use synonyms
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is a bad Linking Words
lifestyle
with fast-food consuming habits. There will be two ideas that can be proposed to tackle Use synonyms
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situation, Linking Words
for example
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,
sugar
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tax
and living a healthy way.Use synonyms
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