Some people say that the clothes people wear are the most important indication of what they are like. Others, however, say that people should not be judged by the clothes they wear. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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people
's
fashion
is something undeniable as they consider it
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a fundamental thing to describe personal character.
However
, others are cons on
this
issue. Those
people
who are pros consider personality based on
fashion
style tend to only live in limited relation compared to the cons. These opinions will be discussed
further
in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with, indicating what someone is like through the way they dress is unstoppable for those who have limited
friends
.
This
situation leads them to judge others who do not have the same
fashion’s
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style as them. As
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illustration, the bureaucrat
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works regularly on formal occasions and has
friends
mostly with the same profession.
This
type of person avoids meeting
people
who dress casually even in non-formal situations as they think that casualty represents
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economy.
In contrast
,
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people
who like casual clothing have enormous
friends
without concern about which type of
fashion
as they believe that what we wear cannot describe who we are.
As a result
, they can easily mingle in any circumstances.
For instance
, Prof. Bill Carter (an Australian who works at Griffith University)
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is a casual person. He has connections in most Asia-Pacific countries as he never judges
people
by the type of clothing his
friends
wear
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he never thinks that our
fashion
style can describe who we really are. All in all,
it is clear that
people
who dress well tend to have limited
friends
while
the casual ones have more as they have different perceptions in indicating personality. (42mins)
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