Some people say that the clothes people wear are the most important indication of what they are like. Others, however, say that people should not be judged by the clothes they wear. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
It is argued that the way
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On the one
hand, the reason people
choose their fashion mostly
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that can make them feel comfortable rather than trend or brand. Sometimes they also
pay attention to the color and appearance of the stuff while
doing shopping since it may boost their mood. For instance
, I personally will choose shirts based on the color
and the material and Change the spelling
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long period because it suits me.
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On the other hand
, some people
argue that we do not have to value others according to
what they wear since we do not know who they are or where they come from. One
general example: in some difficult moments mostly
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might be caused by personal reasons why people
wear informal or casual suits when we meet them in
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Therefore
we do not have any right to justify others based on what they wear.
To conclude
, people
generally will choose fashion
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the fashion
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that suits them and they tend to choose it according to
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