The chart below show changes the proportion of energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003 in a country.

The chart below show changes the proportion of energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003 in a country.
The given pie charts compare the figure for using different resources to produce energy in a country in 1985 and 23.
Overall
, in both
years
oil consumption stood at the first level and hydro was the minimum which remained constant after 18
years
. It can be clearly seen in 1985, just over half of people used oil for generating energy,
while
after 18
years
this
proportion decreased moderately to 39%.
Moreover
, after oil, nuclear is consumed second place about 22% of people in the first year and it saw a fall of 14% turned the fourth of popular resource in the second year.
By contrast
, in 1985, Nuclear gas and coal were 13% and 8%, respectively
then
in 2003, they increased to 23% and 22%.
Also
, the percentage of Hydro stayed the same at 4%. In the first year, the figure for other renewable stood at 1% and after
years
grew up to 4%.
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