The chart below show changes the proportion of energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003 in a country.

The chart below show changes the proportion of energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003 in a country.
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The given pie charts compare the figure for using different resources to produce energy in a country in 1985 and 23.
Overall
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, in both
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oil consumption stood at the first level and hydro was the minimum which remained constant after 18
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. It can be clearly seen in 1985, just over half of people used oil for generating energy,
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after 18
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this
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proportion decreased moderately to 39%.
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, after oil, nuclear is consumed second place about 22% of people in the first year and it saw a fall of 14% turned the fourth of popular resource in the second year.
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, in 1985, Nuclear gas and coal were 13% and 8%, respectively
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in 2003, they increased to 23% and 22%.
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, the percentage of Hydro stayed the same at 4%. In the first year, the figure for other renewable stood at 1% and after
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grew up to 4%.
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