A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice
Dear Sara,
I hope you are doing well. It has been a
while
we
since our Correct pronoun usage
apply
last
meeting, I hope to see soon
. I am writing to you since I heard you are facing some difficulties to adapt with your new school.
I would like to mention that it's a normal reaction when you encounter Correct pronoun usage
you soon
with
a new environment. Change preposition
apply
However
, there are a number of Correct quantifier usage
pieces of advises
advises
I would like to give you to overcome Replace the word
advice
this
issue. First,
try to find friends who can share with you same
interests, Correct article usage
the same
for instance
I know you like drawing. In addition
, I believe you told me once you are playing Change the article
the
a
piano, Change the article
apply
thus
what if you join the music team in your school, this
will probably improve your performance. Otherwise
, there are other types of activities available if your
are interested in tennis or football game. Change the pronoun
you
Finally
, I was on
your situation Change preposition
in
last
year, but with time you will get used to the place and have a bunch of friends who can help you in your personal and academic life.
Take care and I will be glad if you share with me how life goes with you.
Sincerely,
AYASubmitted by aya88.issa on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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