The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
The pie charts give information about the
water
used for residential, industrial and agricultural purposes in San
Diego
County, California
and the world as a whole.
It is noticeable that more water
is consumed by homes than by industry or agriculture in the two American regions. By contrast
, agriculture accounts for the vast majority of the water
used worldwide.
In San
Diego
County and California
State, residential water
consumption accounts for 60% and 39% of total water
usage. However
, a mere 8% of the water
used globally goes to homes. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at water
consumption for agriculture. This
accounts for a massive 69% of global water
use, but only 17% and 28% of water
usage in San
Diego
and California
respectively.
Such
dramatic differences are not seen when we compare the figures for industrial water
use. The same proportion of water
(23%) is used by industry in San
Diego
and worldwide, while
the figure for California
is 10% higher, at 33%.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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