The pie charts below provide information about the changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000.
The pie charts below provide information about the changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000.
Overall
we can see three basic general trends.
As regards the first,
in 1990 there were 45% with higher education, while
in 1980 it was only thirty five
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there are fewer differences in environmental services. It was nine Add a comma
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in 1980. The most striking difference in the data for transportation was that in Change the spelling
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1980s
and 2000s it was sixteen and Change the article
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twenty two
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whereas
in 1990s
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the 1990s
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Furthermore
, in education the patterns are almost similar, it shows 25 in 1080, twenty in 1990 and eighteen percent
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went down to Correct pronoun usage
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one half
(10%).
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trended
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