Since it is so easy to reach a large audience on the internet, people have to be exceptionally talented to become famous these days. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Becoming famous is a dream a lot of
people
have. In recent years, teenagers and young adults use
the range on the internet to promote themselves. It is widely believed, that you need an extraordinary talent
to even get the opportunity to become famous. I strongly disagree with this
statement due to
many examples of people
who use
their money instead
of talent
to get the attention of the audience.
First of all, many of the prominent these days don´t specifically use
a talent
to show off in
their social media. To illustrate, some Change preposition
on
people
who have the desire to be famous, take part in a Reality TV-Show for example
the ones called "Big Brother" or "The Real Housewives". These participants strategically use
the TV-Shows too show the audience they are interesting enough to be followed on social networks. In addition
to that, young adults or teenagers living in wealth and luxury just take videos of their lives and activities. One great example is the family called "The Kardashians".
Furthermore
, people
don´t need to be great singers or excellent guitar players. Often just a viral video on the internet is enough to stand out from all the other users. For example
, a young man started to blend various items like a football in a mixer and his videos went viral. He continued and even asked his audience what new objects he should use
in his videos.
In conclusion, having an extraordinary talent
can be one of the key elements to reach a lot of followers but in my opinion, it is not the main factor to become popular. Often you just need a viral video, a luxurious lifestyle or take part in a Reality TV-Show.Submitted by amal.allouch on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite