Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing. Is this a positive or negative development?

In modern society, more and more
people
migrate from counties to
cities
for some reason,
such
as higher wages, higher welfare treatment, and better living conditions. Some
people
argue that
this
trend affects rural society, but in my opinion, it is a positive development for the whole country.
First,
urbanization
brings economic growth.
Urbanization
translated into countries switching sectoral composition away from
agriculture
into industry and technological advances in domestic
agriculture
releasing labor from
agriculture
to migrate to
cities
.
In other words
, the transfer of labour from less efficient agricultural sectors to more efficient non-agricultural sectors enhances the production efficiency of the whole society.
For instance
, London was one of the first
cities
to experience
urbanization
. Between 1700 and 1800, London grew from 600 thousand to 1.1 million residents.
This
was
due to
industrialization and the growth of urban factories that had a strong need for labour.
People
started moving to London in search of work in the factories.
Although
there was air pollution with
urbanization
, Britain transformed from a backward agricultural country to the world's most advanced capitalist industrial powerhouse, known as the "factory of the world" Meanwhile, the increase in urban population brings a large amount of consumption, which largely drives the market demand.
Second,
rural populations, whose livelihoods mostly depend on
agriculture
, are particularly vulnerable to natural disasters. They have high natural resource dependency and limited ability to cope with and manage risk.
This
means once a disaster has recurred, they cannot overcome it easily.
For instance
, Beijing and its environs experienced heavy rain in 2020, and many houses and vast
areas
of farmland in rural
areas
have been destroyed by a rush of water, but there was almost no news of buildings being destroyed in urban
areas
, which means that urban
areas
have stronger capability to withstand natural calamities.
Third,
cities
provide more job opportunities and better infrastructure
such
as education and healthcare, which will help improve the living standards, education levels, and
overall
health status of immigrants. Those things cannot be provided by rural
areas
. From the whole perspective,
this
trend will not only give more
people
a better life but
also
make social development faster.
Although
there were some problems with rapid
urbanization
, the advantages it brings more than compensated for those problems.
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Example:

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Amenities
  • Economic prospects
  • Overcrowding
  • Traffic congestion
  • Pollution
  • Agricultural abandonment
  • Cultural diversity
  • Innovation
  • Cultural heritage
  • Family ties
  • Infrastructure
  • Public services
  • Sustainable urban planning
  • Rural revitalization
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