The graph shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
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The provided chart depicts the proportion of people who travelled to the Caribbean
island
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and stayed on
island
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and cruise ships from 2010 to 2017. it is clearly observed that
this
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area had the fewest
number
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of tourists, reaching 1
million
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and becoming more popular during the period and had the highest
number
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of visitors back in 2017, 3.5
million
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.
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, most of
this
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period people mostly preferred to stay on the
island
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. In 2010, the
figure
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of travellers who stayed on cruise ships was about 0.2
million
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which increased to 0.5
million
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in 2011.
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, it became less popular the next year around 0.2
million
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. From 2012 onwards, the proportion of adventures that stayed on cruise ships rose minimally to 1.2
million
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in 2015.
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,
this
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figure
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exceeded the
figure
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of travellers who stayed on the
island
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and in 2017, it reached 2
million
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.
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, the
number
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of visitors who stayed on the
island
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was approximately 0.8
million
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in 2010. Whilst,
this
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figure
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did not change over the next year and after 2011, it had a slight growth to 1.5
million
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in 2017 which was the highest
number
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of
this
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figure
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. For the total
number
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of visitors, over the entire period, the total
number
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steadily went up from 1
million
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in 2010 to 2.8
million
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in 2016.
Furthermore
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, from 2016 onwards,
this
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figure
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had a significant rise to 3.5
million
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in 2017.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, number, million, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 6 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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