The graph shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The provided chart depicts the proportion of people who travelled to the Caribbean
island
and stayed on Use synonyms
island
and cruise ships from 2010 to 2017.
it is clearly observed that Use synonyms
this
area had the fewest Linking Words
number
of tourists, reaching 1 Use synonyms
million
and becoming more popular during the period and had the highest Use synonyms
number
of visitors back in 2017, 3.5 Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
Whereas
, most of Linking Words
this
period people mostly preferred to stay on the Linking Words
island
.
In 2010, the Use synonyms
figure
of travellers who stayed on cruise ships was about 0.2 Use synonyms
million
which increased to 0.5 Use synonyms
million
in 2011. Use synonyms
Whereas
, it became less popular the next year around 0.2 Linking Words
million
. From 2012 onwards, the proportion of adventures that stayed on cruise ships rose minimally to 1.2 Use synonyms
million
in 2015. Use synonyms
Similarly
, Linking Words
this
Linking Words
figure
exceeded the Use synonyms
figure
of travellers who stayed on the Use synonyms
island
and in 2017, it reached 2 Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
number
of visitors who stayed on the Use synonyms
island
was approximately 0.8 Use synonyms
million
in 2010. Whilst, Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
figure
did not change over the next year and after 2011, it had a slight growth to 1.5 Use synonyms
million
in 2017 which was the highest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
figure
.
For the total Use synonyms
number
of visitors, over the entire period, the total Use synonyms
number
steadily went up from 1 Use synonyms
million
in 2010 to 2.8 Use synonyms
million
in 2016. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, from 2016 onwards, Linking Words
this
Linking Words
figure
had a significant rise to 3.5 Use synonyms
million
in 2017.Use synonyms
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