The table below shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013.
The given table depicts the number of
tourists
and the Use synonyms
spendings
in 5 countries in 2012 and 2013.
Fix the agreement mistake
spending
Overall
, France got the highest amount of Linking Words
tourists
but the USA got the highest profit. ItalyUse synonyms
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, in contrast,
in contrast
got both the lowest number of travellers and spending.
In 2012, France attracted 83 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
tourists
and Use synonyms
then
increased by nearly 2 Linking Words
million
by the next Use synonyms
year
. Spain had the number of Use synonyms
tourists
increased the most with more than 3 Use synonyms
million
compared to a Use synonyms
year
prior. China was the only country which had fewer Use synonyms
tourists
than in the previous Use synonyms
year
. Italy got the least amount of travellers with 46.4 Use synonyms
million
in 2012, Use synonyms
then
climbed to 47.7 Linking Words
million
in 2013.
Despite attracting the most Use synonyms
tourists
in both years, France only got about 53 Use synonyms
billion
dollars in 2012, Use synonyms
then
increased by 2.5 Linking Words
billion
. Use synonyms
USA
was the country with the highest Correct article usage
The USA
spendings
of 126 Fix the agreement mistake
spending
billion
dollars, Use synonyms
also
with the biggest difference Linking Words
with
over 13 Change preposition
of
billion
dollars. Spain Use synonyms
also
got more spending of 4 Linking Words
billion
compared to a Use synonyms
year
before. China despite a drop in the amount of Use synonyms
tourists
but surprisingly had an upward trend in revenue. Italy continued to Use synonyms
had
the lowest income in both of the years.Change the verb
have
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