The table below shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013.
The given table depicts the number of
tourists
and the spendings
in 5 countries in 2012 and 2013.
Fix the agreement mistake
spending
Overall
, France got the highest amount of tourists
but the USA got the highest profit. ItalyAdd the comma(s)
, in contrast,
in contrast
got both the lowest number of travellers and spending.
In 2012, France attracted 83 million
tourists
and then
increased by nearly 2 million
by the next year
. Spain had the number of tourists
increased the most with more than 3 million
compared to a year
prior. China was the only country which had fewer tourists
than in the previous year
. Italy got the least amount of travellers with 46.4 million
in 2012, then
climbed to 47.7 million
in 2013.
Despite attracting the most tourists
in both years, France only got about 53 billion
dollars in 2012, then
increased by 2.5 billion
. USA
was the country with the highest Correct article usage
The USA
spendings
of 126 Fix the agreement mistake
spending
billion
dollars, also
with the biggest difference with
over 13 Change preposition
of
billion
dollars. Spain also
got more spending of 4 billion
compared to a year
before. China despite a drop in the amount of tourists
but surprisingly had an upward trend in revenue. Italy continued to had
the lowest income in both of the years.Change the verb
have
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