Subjects like arts, music and drama are more important than other subjects and therefore should be given more time in the calendar. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that when it comes to
subjects
like arts, music and drama they should be more important rather than other subjects
and therefore
more time should be spent on them. I agree with the statement,
because participating in these fields of art can lead to ease of mind and cognitive skills improvement.
Aesthetic works, like music, drama and arts play an important role in rising above everyday life. Remove the comma
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Due to
the fact that artistic, musical and visual elements are usually arranged and combined in such
a way that they create a feeling of excitement, they are worthy to pay more attention in our everyday life. Although
some people may find drawing a piece of art or playing a musical instrument challenging, just beholding a painting or listening to a song is itself enough to feel you excited, as these actions are an expression of human nature. For instance
, it is reported that people who do painting beside
their daily routines Change preposition
besides
are consider
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are considered
percent
more satisfied with their lives, compared to those who do not do painting at all.
Provoking serious and careful thoughts, any kind of participation in fields of art leads to cognitive capabilities improvement. Change the spelling
per cent
In other words
, since these subjects
inspire biological response
, they can strengthen our cognitive skills. So, not only our ability to do day-to-day functions will be improved, but Fix the agreement mistake
responses
also
our skills in various other fields, such
as solving math problems will be widened.
In conclusion, subjects
like arts, music and drama can noticeably affect the quality of our lives in positive
way. Change the article
a positive
Therefore
, if we consider them worthy to spend more time on them, we might have a happier life and our cognitive functions may improve,Submitted by soudabehabedii on
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