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Some people think cities are the best place to live. Others people prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is considered that cities are the perfect areas to live,
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 others believed that living in the countryside is better. In my opinion, living inner-
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 will have more high-tech equipment and living in the rural areas is suitable for people who want to let their hair down. On the one hand, living in the
city
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 will have more opportunities to get a well-paid job
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 a lot of companies, factories, and manufacturers there, which can attract a large number of young adults from rural areas. People tend to live in a space that can ensure they will have a sophisticated life.
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,
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city
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 will have much higher living costs and the levels of crime and unemployment are higher too. That means you need to be poised on the brink of the thief and become a circumspect person whenever you want to hang out.
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, it is a certitude to believe that a community can live a serene life if they move house to the countryside. The main reason is humour can experience lower living costs and the pace of life is slower so that they can enjoy the value of living.
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, they can have some prerogative that nowhere has like folksy repast, leave the flurried lifestyle and admire the natural landscapes. After taking the essay into consideration, I am convinced that living in the
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 will have more capitalization for me to develop myself to the fullest.
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 some notion of society that the
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 is a hustle and bustle place, I concur that if I want to become stronger, I need to come to terms with the difficulties and acceptance in my soul. I believed that the hasty lifestyle is a driving force behind me to try my best.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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