the table shows information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries

the table shows information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries
The table provides information about the percentage of money spent by people in three categories in five different areas. Looking from the
overall
perspective it is readily apparent that all inhabitants spend the most on food and drinks and a little bit less on fashion,
while
spendings on education and leisure activities are miserable. With regards to supermarkets, the country with the highest budget spending on food and drinks is Turkey (with 32,14%), followed by Ireland, with almost 29%. Spain takes third place with 18,80%,
while
Italy and Sweden consume the lowest proportion and made up 16,36% and 15,77% respectively.
According to
clothing and footwear, Italian used to buy more items,
therefore
this
category made up 9% and make
this
nation a leader.
In addition
, clothes and footwear accounted for 6,63% of Turkey and 6,51% of Spain.
However
, countries
such
as Ireland and Sweden spend the least amount of money (6,43% and 5,40% respectively)
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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