the table shows information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries

the table shows information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries
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The table provides information about the percentage of money spent by people in three categories in five different areas. Looking from the
overall
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perspective it is readily apparent that all inhabitants spend the most on food and drinks and a little bit less on fashion,
while
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spendings on education and leisure activities are miserable. With regards to supermarkets, the country with the highest budget spending on food and drinks is Turkey (with 32,14%), followed by Ireland, with almost 29%. Spain takes third place with 18,80%,
while
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Italy and Sweden consume the lowest proportion and made up 16,36% and 15,77% respectively.
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clothing and footwear, Italian used to buy more items,
therefore
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this
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category made up 9% and make
this
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nation a leader.
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, clothes and footwear accounted for 6,63% of Turkey and 6,51% of Spain.
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, countries
such
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as Ireland and Sweden spend the least amount of money (6,43% and 5,40% respectively)
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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