There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have verbally complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter Describe what the problems with the changing rooms is Say what happened the last times you complained Explain what you want the manager to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter to express my complaint about the changing rooms at your "Abbotsford sports complex" in Surrey, which I visit regularly.
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I have verbally complained many times regarding
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matter, no one has taken action so far.
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with, the main issues are related to cleanliness and safety. The floors in the changing rooms are often wet, unhygienic, and
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there is a strong, unpleasant smell.
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, most of the locker locks are broken, making it unsafe to leave personal belongings. About one month ago, I reported these problems to the front desk staff. Each time
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staff assured me that these issues have been taken care of
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, I have not seen any visible improvements so far. I would
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request you to take immediate action to make necessary improvements for these concerns , including cleaning, repair of locker locks, showers and thermostat. I would suggest that you should hire a concerned staff member who can take care of the maintenance of your sports complex. Thank you for your time and attention. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Sukriti

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content
Add more exact details like dates and place, and say what must be done now. Use simple facts.
structure
Keep one main idea in each paragraph. Start with the problem, then tell about past checks, then say what you want. Use simple linking words.
tone
Be polite and firm. Use calm tone to show you want action.
grammar
Check grammar and punctuation. Fix comma use and help word form. Use short, clear words.
vocabulary
Use common words only. Some words in the letter are not in top 100 words. Replace with plain words like 'clean', 'safe', 'work'.
content
The letter states the problem and the past talk clearly.
tone
It ends with a request for action and a polite close.
style
The letter uses a formal and respectful style.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • frequent user
  • specific issues
  • cleanliness
  • hygiene
  • broken facilities
  • lack of supplies
  • address the issue
  • response
  • emphasize
  • well-maintained
  • comfort
  • hygiene
  • politely
  • firmly
  • request
  • resolve
  • prompt resolution
  • discuss
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