The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 254 words.

Its

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argued that

,

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apply

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doing group

sport

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sports

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activies

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activities

could be

a tools

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a tool

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for

yougsters

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youngsters

to interact

between

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each other. I fondly agree

to

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this

notion because

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can be

a

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applied easily and the rest of the issues will be elaborated

in

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this

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following paragraph. On the one hand, children nowadays are encouraged to have active life through some activities

such

as joining

club

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clubs

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to playing games together. The main aim is to educate them to be able to socialize,

sharing

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share

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,

caring

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and lean on each other as a

team

.

For instance

,

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a student

the student

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student

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students

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who

join

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joins

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basketball

team

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teams

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tend to have many

friend

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friends

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and when they are in trouble it

easy

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for them to ask for help.

Thus

get

involve

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in school activities

become

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becomes

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an effective way to educate children to

lean

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learn

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around

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themselves as a community.

on the other hand

,

others

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benefits could find in

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way they learn how to communicate

between

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each other, especially when they have a chance to be a leader. With

this

capacity, they could act as a captain lead the

team

, set the goal,

find

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a solution for a problem.

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, they

abruply

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abruptly

mastering

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master

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leadership

skill

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skills

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at in

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in

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early

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age which

is

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this

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could be an informal education that they learn directly

while

doing the sport.

To sum up

,

ssking

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asking

the children to

taking

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take

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part

on

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some group activities bring myriad of benefits inevitably

such

as

become

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becoming

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more tactical

between

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each other and

have

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having

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an early experience to become a leader in a

team

.

In addition

,

this

also

bring

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brings

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huge

advatages

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advantages

advantage

in health.