Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays. What are the reason for this? What can be done to solve the problem.

Paying attention to
lessons
at school or focusing on certain
subjects
can be challenging
to
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for
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students
due to
many factors nowadays. As a matter of fact,
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teaching methods and the
duration
of the
lessons
are the most significant reasons for interest lost in
subjects
, even for the whole concept of a school.
Firstly
a group of teachers follow classical education formulas for their
students
. These approaches include taking notes
on
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a notebook and solving lots of exercises which are related to
subjects
.
However
, those individuals
already
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aware of technological opportunities and how these can
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be implamented
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implamented
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implemented
implement
to
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in
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their lectures by their lecturers.
For instance
, the teacher who uses technological advances
such
as smart boards or Powerpoint slides for their
lessons
takes more
attentions
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by
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students
than others.
Therefore
, the remaining educators should be aware of these techniques, and consider
to use
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them in the long term.
Secondly
, those
students
generally complain about lecture durations which are more than a fifty-minute. Rarely do lecturers try to reduce the
duration
of
lessons
by using the
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method which provides shorter durations for
lessons
and improves the interest in
learning
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process.
Moreover
,
this
technique can be beneficial for both
students
and their lecturers by reducing
lessons
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lesson
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duration
and inclining
attentions
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attention
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. In conclusion, it is hard to completely focus on schools and
subjects
for
students
due to
the
duration
of
lessons
or obsolete educational methods.
Nevertheless
, some approaches can significantly increase the motivation of
students
, those are
implamenting
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implementing
new technologies to
subjects
and reducing teaching hours.
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