Accommodation is an intricate choice in any person's life when both rural areas and
urban's
life conditions are Change noun form
urban
getting improve
. Since living in the countryside provides a fresh atmosphere and is encouraged by the government, I believe that cities offering high-quality services and job opportunities are superior to living in.
It is crucial to acknowledge that the air pollution rate in the scenery is much lower than in the urban, Wrong verb form
improving
this
is known Linking Words
as a result
of fewer vehicles and manufacturing sites that produce carbon emissions. Linking Words
Therefore
, making the air Linking Words
more healthy
for the residents. Alongside that, other pollution Correct word choice
healthier
such
as light or noise is mitigated in rural. Another aspect that should be mentioned is living in these places will receive a subsidy from the government, Linking Words
this
is a campaign that every country is driving to reduce the population in metropolitans.
Despite the benefits of living in the countryside, cities have more well-constructed amenity facilities and infrastructures which enhance the inhabitant's lives. Linking Words
For example
, there are always top schools in the urban centre, and living near these will be more advantageous when studying. As same as that, international companies and some key companies are, mostly, have their headquarters in the centre. Linking Words
Hence
, giving the labourers more chances to be employed.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
it is believed that living in the scenery can raise people's health and Linking Words
also
is a stimulating action. The writer holds the view that staying in the urban will improve the local lifestyle which is a key for country development, and produce jobs.Linking Words