There is a problem in the road outside your house. Write a letter to your local councilor. In your letter: •introduce yourself, •explain what the problem is, •tell the councilors what you would like to be done.

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Dear Mr. Smith My name is Abraham Streeter, a resident of Willington Countryside and I am pleased to be in contact with you as one of the respectful and reliable members of our area council. Hereby, I am writing to express my concern about the deficient condition of King Street as one of the main roads in our area. In fact, over the

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several months the road has developed numerous potholes and cracks.

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, it poses serious risks for drivers and pedestrians.

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situation has made it increasingly difficult for children as they must navigate the school to walk around the hazards.

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has caused not only some near misses in the area but

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, damaged some cars during the night seemingly quite formidable to bypass the potholes.

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, I respectfully request that the council take prompt action to repair the road by filling the potholes and resurfacing the cracked areas, which

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, doing so will improve safety and accessibility for everyone who uses

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road. I thank you in advance for your kind attention and look forward to your prompt response. Yours sincerely Abraham Streeter

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Greeting and Closing

Ensure you start with a clear greeting and end with a closing statement, as you did here.

Logical Structure

Maintain the clear logical structure seen here, with each paragraph covering a specific point.

Logical Structure

You provided a well-structured response with clear paragraphs for each point.

Suitable Writing Tone

Your writing tone is suitable and formal for a letter to a local councilor.

Complete Response

You clearly described the problem and provided a specific request for action.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

192 words

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