In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

One of the social concerns
today
relates to
crime
novels
and
TV
crime
dramas
are becoming more and more popular in many
countries
today
.
Firstly
, I think these
books
and
TV
shows are popular in many
countries
today
. Because the
currently
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crime
situations are increasing more and more popular in many
countries
today
.
Furthermore
, these crimes are
also
very dangerous to
society
.
In addition
, we need to learn
people
how to prevent crimes.
Therefore
, these
crime
books
and
TV
crime
shows are becoming more and more popular in many
countries
today
.
For example
, The Crimes Century are publishing more and more
today
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most publish
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in
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.
Secondly
, the world
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situations
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are decreasing more and more alarm in recent years. So, the
increase
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crime
situation is
also
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and more.
Furthermore
, the
crime
novels
and
TV
crime
dramas
that increasing publishment should be
more
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encouraged to
people
can read and watch them.
Therefore
, these
books
and
TV
shows are
populer
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popular
in many
countries
today
. In my opinion, I think
crime
novels
and
TV
crime
dramas
are becoming more and more popular in many
countries
is
benefit
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for
society
today
. On the one hand, these
books
and
TV
shows can help
people
how to prevent the
increase
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increased
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crime
situation.
On the other hand
, they are attractive publishment that concerned
by
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society
today
. In conclusion,
crime
novels
and
TV
crime
dramas
are becoming more and more popular in many
countries
today
are
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and are
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benefit
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for
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people
in
the
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society
. I encourage
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