Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
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terms of causes, it has been found that one of the paramount reasons that lead to an obvious decline in different species is hunting practices by hunters. Correct your spelling
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, research institutions and animal right activist should cooperate and dedicate their efforts and money in order to provide a healthy and sustainable Linking Words
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