Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

It is indisputable that some species of animals are extinct,

while

the number of others

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to be reduced dramatically during

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the

last

four decades. In

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essay, I will shed light on

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critical topic, including the main reasons

as well as

the possible solution for

this

alarming problem.

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terms of causes, it has been found that one of the paramount reasons that lead to an obvious decline in different species is hunting practices by hunters.

In other words

, hunting is one of the ancient practices that people used to do for various purposes,

for instance

as a source of food, creating fashionable designs from

species's

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skin or sports activities.

In addition

, some creatures need

particular

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the particular

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environment

for growth and reproduction.

However

, nowadays many

animals

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houses were destroyed or replaced with

other modern style

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environment

merely as parks, business buildings or even residential areas. On the other end of the scale, there are a bunch of proposed solutions to control

this

problem, since it may

causes

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detrimental

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a detrimental

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impact on our

environment

due to

imbalance

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in the biodiversity system.

Firstly

, governments should step up and take prompt action, including

prohibit

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killing in all ways or purposes.

Secondly

, research institutions and animal right activist should cooperate and dedicate their efforts and money in order to provide a healthy and sustainable

environment

where rare animals can live

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and breed. In conclusion, some creatures are threatened

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extinction because of some human activities.

Thus

, it is extremely essential that governments ensure steps are taken to prevent

this

phenomenon from deteriorating

further

.