The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisonswhererelevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given diagram represents the way
plastic
bottles
are sorted, reformed, and produced for other goods.
Overall
, the process involves 9 steps, starting with recycling by people and ending up with converting to end products.
First of all, after people threw away plastic
bottles
, trucks gather and carry them to a recycling centre. Workers in the centre sort the bottles
which are on a moving container. These sorted bottles
become blocks that are compressed by a pressing machine. Next,
toothed wheels crush these compressed blocks and break them into small plastic
pieces.
After washing the pieces, they are passed to the machine which converts crushed plastics to plastic
pellets. Throughout the machine, plastic
pellets are heated and become a raw material. This
step is followed by making a raw material, which is formed into a fixed shape and stocked by turns. Finally
, by using raw materials, various goods are produced and sold to people.Submitted by guseoin on
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