The pie chart shows the factors that negatively affect the development of agricultural land around the world,while the table illustrates the process of land degradation in the three main regions of these factors.
The pie chart shows the factors that negatively affect the development of agricultural
land
around the world,while
the table illustrates the process of land
degradation in the three main regions of these factors.
Overall
,over-grazing,deforestation and over-cultivation are the main significant causes of agricultural land
degradation around the world.Europe has a much higher level of degraded land
than Oceania and North America.
Over-grazing accounts for 35% of degraded land
in the world,it is the biggest cause of large-scale land
degradation.While
deforestation and over-cultivation account for 30% and 28% and other degradations
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degradation
account
for 7%.
Of all these three regions,Europe had the largest share of degraded Correct subject-verb agreement
accounts
land
in the 1990s,accounting for 23%.However
,the biggest factor was not over-grazing but deforestation as a result
of which the indicators showed 9.8% of the land
became less nasty.Oceania was the
second after Europe for a total of 13% of it"s degraded Correct article usage
apply
land
and this
was caused by over-grazing of 11.3%.For
comparison,a total of 5% of the Change preposition
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land
in North America was degraded and over-cultivation responsible for 3.3% was the biggest cause.Submitted by dnm.best on
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