The pie chart shows the factors that negatively affect the development of agricultural land around the world,while the table illustrates the process of land degradation in the three main regions of these factors.

The pie chart shows the factors that negatively affect the development of agricultural

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around the world,

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the table illustrates the process of

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degradation in the three main regions of these factors.

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,over-grazing,deforestation and over-cultivation are the main significant causes of agricultural

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degradation around the world.Europe has a much higher level of degraded

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than Oceania and North America. Over-grazing accounts for 35% of degraded

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in the world,it is the biggest cause of large-scale

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degradation.

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deforestation and over-cultivation account for 30% and 28% and other

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for 7%. Of all these three regions,Europe had the largest share of degraded

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in the 1990s,accounting for 23%.

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,the biggest factor was not over-grazing but deforestation

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of which the indicators showed 9.8% of the

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became less nasty.Oceania was

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second after Europe for a total of 13% of it"s degraded

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and

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was caused by over-grazing of 11.3%.

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comparison,a total of 5% of the

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in North America was degraded and over-cultivation responsible for 3.3% was the biggest cause.