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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Despite
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 usually
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 in a company or organization, some
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work
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 by themselves in the form of
freelancers
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.
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 essay will examine the reason why
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 situation happened and what negative parts are existed of being self-employed. The two main causes of the increasing freelancer are the appearance of the coronavirus and the rising rate of working in homes. After covid-19 became deeper, many companies suggest workers
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 in their houses to prevent diseases.
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, though the virus became weaker,
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 who highly evaluate the advantages of working at home, quit their companies and become self-employed. The positive parts of freelancing are convenience and flexible time. They can
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 only when they want, and
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 they can use their time more flexibly,
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, they can start working at 12 pm, which is unusual for company workers who usually start working at 9am.
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, being self-employed
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 has disadvantages.
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freelancers
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 should bring
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 by themselves, so earnings depend on the amount of
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.
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 workers in companies receive assignments from bosses or other colleagues and get a regular income,
freelancers
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 have to find
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 who need them and
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 them for.
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, if
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 cannot find employees for a month, they will not receive a
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 fee and hard to make their life during that time.
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, a border of
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 and break is not accurate.
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, if the person did not finish the
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 by its deadline, he cannot take a break before he finishes it. In conclusion, the trend virus and advantages of being self-employed make many
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,
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, gaining
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 oneself and a blurred boundary between
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 and break are negative things about these self-employed.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employment
  • freelancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • autonomy
  • financial stability
  • work-life balance
  • financial insecurity
  • lack of support
  • resources
  • long working hours
  • uncertain income
  • job security
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