The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The line chart illustrates the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in four countries (UK, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal) between 1967 to 2007. The unit is measured in metric
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, during 1967-2007, the country that produced the highest CO2 emissions is the United Kingdom
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Portugal produce the lowest CO2 emission is Portugal. Both
To begin
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with, the United Kingdom produced approximately 11 metric
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of CO2 in the early years and
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it progressively went down to around 9 metric
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in 2007. The downward trends
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happened to Sweeden which produced just above 8 metric
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in 1967,
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just went up and reach a peak of just above 10 metric
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in 1977 and
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periodically declined to just below 6 metric
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in the final year.
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, both Italy and Portugal have an inclined production of CO2 emissions during periods. In 1967, Italy and Portugal produce just above 4 and around 1 metric tonne respectively and
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in the final
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It has increased to roughly 8 and just below 6 metric
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respectively.
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